Venture Capital MBAs - Essay feedback on AppMentor


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Start a project with HBS_MBA_08! Mentor:
HBS_MBA_08
Accepted at: Harvard HBS
Industry Exp: Consulting, Entrepreneurship, Government, Retail, Technology, Telecom, Venture Capital
Gender: Female
Background: United States
 
Mentor Details:   I have always had a passion for mentoring as it is one of my greatest strengths. I graduated from HBS in 2008 and have quite a few friends/acquaintances apply to HBS, Wharton, Kellogg, Berkeley and Stanford. My strenghts lie in formulating an overall strategy to build a cohesive application and I can definitely offer help on specific essays. I will ensure that my client's essays clearly and accurately integrate and portray their intent, objectives, and personality to make a compelling case for admission. Career wise, I owned two businesses and worked at two top consulting firms prior to attending HBS. Feel free to choose me if you would like targeted, constructive feedback. Thanks for your time and best of luck!

Start a project with Swets! Mentor:
Swets
Accepted at: Michigan Ross
Industry Exp: Consulting, Entrepreneurship, Health Services and Health Care, Venture Capital
Gender: Female
Background: India
 
Mentor Details:   Being an international student and a career switcher, it was of paramount importance for me to make a compelling case for an MBA and in US. On my way to come up with a coherent story for my applications, I have learned what works and what doesn't. And I think this learning will be significant value-add to you. I'm passionate about mentoring young and ambitious candidates achieve their dream of admission into a Top B-school. My strengths lie in crafting an overall strategy with all parts of application and at the same time paying attention to minute details in essays and resumes to help you perfect them. All AdComs look for uniqueness expressed genuinely. And I will help you discover the best in you and convey it in the best possible way. Good Luck!  Read Swets's blog

Start a project with top20bschoolexpert! Mentor:
top20bschoolexpert
Accepted at: Duke Fuqua
Industry Exp: Computer Related, Consulting, Entrepreneurship, Finance, Non Profit, Private Equity, Technology, Venture Capital
Gender: Male
Background: United States
 
Mentor Details:   I'm currently a second year student at the Fuqua School of Business. I have always had a passion for helping others advance their careers, and I want to help you so you can shine among other qualified applicants. Having recently gone through the application process, I can help you identify your strengths and weaknesses and improve your chance of getting into the school of your choice! I have edited numerous essays and resumes for my friends applying to top business schools. I'd like to help you as well. I am an excellent storyteller and will do my best to help you articulate (and integrate) your stories through your essays. I have a unique mix of background in strategy consulting, venture capital, social entrepreneurship, and Internet start-up.